its my first time to do a story and im only 10 may not be the best but here goes nothing:

OBI
2 years old

he was walking on the beach one day a hesaw something realy shiny and it was multi colored.he decided to take it to the sceintist and found out he found a rare shell he was very happy .then he decided to go look for some more he then found a uncommon shell and was happy again . then one day he was watching a mother bird nursing her baby. he grew in parenting skill.the next day the mother bird let go of her babys and was best freinds with obi. one day the village was running low on food and obi was very hungry so the mother bird help by dropping nuts in the food bin. the village thanked the mother bird very much.

10 years old
he was nearing adult hood and would soon have to do many tasks.
he trained and trained at farming , building, and parenting.

14 years old
it was time for obi to do his tasks to become an adult he was very good from al the training he did he could fiz=x huts ,fish , and teach kids at school

18 years old
he was old enough to have a wife now.his wifes name was wana
she and him liked each other very much. they one day went into a hut covered in flowers then came out with twins. they were very exited.

20 years old
obi became a very young esteemed elder.he got a totem and celebrated all night with the villagers.

60 years old obi was getting old and was very sick he was nearing death.his two girls kiki and kuku were old now and wana passed onto the next life.his duater grew up to have totems of there own he was very happy.

76 years
he was low on health and very soon about to die. the next day he died they all gathered around his funeral. he had joined his wife in heaven.


hope you liked it. \:\)
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WANA

2 years old
she was just let go bye her mother and had a freind named obi.
they were also freinds with a bird that was taking care of her babys witch tought them about parenting.the village ran low on food and wana was hungry and so was obi then the bird dropped food in the food bin and they all thanked the bird (as in obi's story)

10 years old
obi her freind was trainig for adulthood when she was learning how to take care of a baby.she was the best in her class.

14 years old
she was not old enough to do her test yet but obi was a pro at his. they celebrated in a cave they found behined the water fall.

18 years old
it was time for her to have a husband and since obi was her best freind they got married.they had two twins named kiki and kuku.

20 years old
obi was now a esteemed elder but in secret she went into a hut with another villager and had a kid named keni.

59 years old
she was very sick and was low on health she then later in the day died her freind obi and other freind peto(witch was they father of keni) were at the funeral.
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KIKI and KUKU

2 years old
there fathers name was obi and there mothers name was wana.
they loved playing tag with the other villagers and one day decided to go wondering by the waterfall wear there mother told them was a secret hide out were obi and her played then one of the girls fell in she saw something deep in there and a villager came to save her.they told the master scientist and builders about it they made a stew that let them retreive a peice of the gong of wonder.in return they tuaght her and her sister how to bacome masters at building and reasearching.

4 years old
there mother told them another secret about the hideout she told them where it was. they found the way behind the water fall and played there alot they also where thought to have dissapeared by the villagers but were later found and thought of playing hide and seek.they had a step brother named keni.

6 years old
they asked there mother if they could show keni they secret hideout she said now because he liked telling secrets.there mother told them the story of the bird and how she saved the tribe.

18 years old
they were like there mother ,very skilled in parenting and had kids of there own mimi and kiko there father was topeko.

29 years old
they both were esteemed elders and were very happy so they celebrated in the cave becuase they were happy the twins had two totems that looked the same.

41 years old there mother died that day they cried and cried becuase they loved there mother very much.

58 years old
they were now parentless and could not have kids there kids were now adults.

100 years old
the oldest villagers in the tribe were very soon about to pass away the next day,they did there kids were at the funeril and topeka died at the age of 93
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m done righting year storys how about these





the mystery cave

one day obi and wana where by the pond becuase they loved playing near it.one day wana tripped and went through the waterfall so obi went to save her. they found a tsble and a few toys and games etc. and loved playing there. when it was day of elders or something specil they would celebrate there. one day obi had a dream of him leaning against the wall and dreamed the wall collapsed and he wondered if he sould go through the opening or not. he picked to, he was astonished by what he saw he saw gold,silver,bronze,food, and a bunch of machines that gave the tribe tech points.the next day obi and wana went to the cave and obi went to the wall that colapsed in his dream.he tapped on it and it fell. they went there and found just what they found in the dream the put the food in the food bin and gave the machines to the sceintist. the next day there was a very dense fog then all they food dissapeared the fog came from the cave and they opening so they closed the opening and it was never opened again. they still loved playing there though.
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one day a terrible storm came and lightning struck obi and wanas cave the cave collapsed and the obi and wana were shocked they never have seen such a storm.the next day a volcaneo erupted not to far it was the biggest volcano in history it wiped away half the village and it killed 50 members of the tribe this happened 1000 years after obi and wana.the lava was so horribale they moved away from there homeland into a new part of isola.


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Edited by LadyCFII (09/03/08 02:19 AM)