This is the comment thread for my first story, Persephone the castaway. Hope you enjoyed it. If you didn't like please tell me. I'll try to fix what you didn't like. The next chapters will be out soon!

It was good, but I'm sure the next chapter will be even better!

It was great considering that was your first Fan Fiction!

Thanks!

I love it! Something different for once.

The third chapter had been submitted about a week ago, so I'm starting to worry! I hope you all liked the second chapter! thanks for the good feedback. I thought would'nt get any!

I am enjoying your story telling very much, cc! You have a knack for it! I don't think you should worry or question yourself again about submitting a new chapter, or a whole different story even... you are doing great, and you give us something to look forward to! Thanks for sharing with us!

It's a good story, I like how two of them come from a sinking ship.

Wow! I really enjoyed this!

You guys made me blush! Thanks for the support, it really makes my day! I'll try to get as much chapters out as I can before the school year starts, so that I'm not rushing around with all the stuff going on. I promise that the next chapter will be out soon.

Oh goody! I've been waiting for the next chapter to come out.

It's really good so far, I love the way you describe their day-to-day life.

I abosolutely adore this story!! Its so keen to our veiw of their life, as we've seen it through the screen... but I just adore the characters! I think you should add another character soon though! Great job cookie!

Thanks Guys! Don't Worry Nora Willow, New Characters will come soon! And Casey
Lynn sometimes I cheat and skip a week! I'm counting down the days until school starts which is in one week and a day. I'm planning chapter 5 right now!

My school starts this Thursday! But right now I'm having the dreaded Writer's block!! My Spelling and Grammer was really a train wreck last chapter, But You live and you learn!