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#213909 - 12/24/09 01:58 AM
History of Lewon/Future on Isola
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You can comment here: Preview:Lewon is the island where the current Isolans lived before the volcano went off forcing the survivors to flee. Chapter 1. The scientists had created a potion that when you poured it on Lava it turned the Lava to rock. They mass produced this potion and poured a lot in the volcano. However it caused an unforeseen reaction. That night the tribes people went about their jobs as usual. Then the volcano erupted. The master scientists didn't understand they thought that their potion stopped it. But it was a different story now. People started running towards the docks to get off of the island because the elders said this eruption was going to be bigger than any before it and that the island would be destroyed. Most people managed to make it to a boat and start sailing away. They took a moment to see what had used to be their home get destroyed by the flaming lava. The scientists were confused as to why it erupted. They figured that the chemical only hardened the top, but let pressure build up beneath it causing it to erupt. The tribe sailed for days. Many of the boats got sunk during a storm. There were only two boats left when the tribe saw an island that looked jungly. They started heading towards it. All of a sudden a huge wave came from no where and smashed the boats and took the villagers on shore. The villagers looked up. What is this place that looks like a tropical paradise? Where is it? to be continued...
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#214262 - 12/29/09 05:47 AM
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Preview: Due to the fact that these are based off of modern tribes, there will be small delays in development, averaging from 5-15 days. Chapter two. The villagers immediatly got to work. It was very hard at first. There were several times where the villagers ran out of food and the guiding hand wasn't around. The guiding hand soon returned and bought the fishing technology. After this the villagers got to work. The tribe slowly grew the researcher gained thousands of tech points, and the food never got below 50,000. Then some of the first people to land started dying of old age. But the trbie remained fully working. Soon there were awesome structures and other things that the villagers accomplished. The teachings of the elders before they passed on were kept. Legends of a far away island called Lewon inspired the kids and kept the adults at ease.But it gave them fears of a volcano on Isola. The kids continued to play, dance, and find mushrooms. The adults continued working. The tribe soon had all the huts built, lots of tech points, and lots of food. To be continued...
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#214374 - 12/30/09 06:42 AM
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Preview: The villagers were getting restless with their part of the island.
Chapter 3. The villagers completed all technologies and found all the puzzles. Or so they thought. There was only one place where the villagers hadn't explored. It was a very damp cave with many turns and dark passages. There were vines everywhere. Two people stepped forth. A male and a Female. They believed little else could be done on the island. They heard rushing water and tried to find it. They soon found and opening that led to a waterfall. The waterfall had seemed to make the stones wet. All of the sudden the man slipped, grabbed the lady and down the water fall they went, leaving their beloved paradise behind. They were lucky to land in a pool of water which was very deep. They looked up. It seemed like they were in a slightly altered village. Then they saw four dirty and hungry looking children. Each one seemed very scared. The adults offered to take care of them and help them build up the village. To be continued...
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#214552 - 01/03/10 02:30 AM
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Preview: Reading my previews can become very confusing. Due to the fact of many various reasons, these can come out from a range of one a minute to one a year.
Chapter 4. The adults and one teenager soon got to work while the children had fun running around, picking mushrooms, and finding collectibles. Within a few years there was a nice hut built, a dam under construction and the availibility of coconuts. But disaster soon struck. The waters where so many fish had once swam were overrun by algae. The few fish still around were difficult for the farmers to find. They gave up on searching through the disgusting algae and started harvesting coconuts. Soon the dam was built and villagers could farm. They temporarily began gaining food. So the villagers bought all kinds of tech. They found a couldron to make stews. But a savage boy decided to visit the village and started scratching his back with and important instrument. A scientist chased him away, but he still had the tool. The village started growing, and Bora became and esteemed elder. But the farming and the coconuts weren't enough to support the larger tribe. There were several points where there was no food in the village. But the farmers came back soon after that with new crops, so the village survived. After saving many tech points, the villagers discovered they were fishing wrong. They soon introduced a new algae eating type of fish and they could fish again. The population grew some more and the villagers restored one hut, built a second one and accomplished several other achievements. Food was behind them, and they saved many tech points and were researching at 120%. The farmers were pulling in fish by the thousands. Food was kind of wavering but still very stable to what it was a few years ago. It looked like the tribe would make it. But it was small and most of the people were near death in the Luke Tribe. There was only one female who could still have children, and she was getting older. The tribe was relying on a baby girl. To be continued...
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#214694 - 01/05/10 05:34 AM
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Preview: This time I stuck to my word. I.m proud of myself.
Chapter 5. The tribe soon had two baby girls running around. After a few years a barrel of babies arrived. One boy and one girl. After many more years, lots of fish, tons of crops, and the occasional coconut, the tribe found ancient writings on a wall behind some vines. The tribe also grew a bit, but it was still so small it might not have made it. But another couple soon came down the waterfall. The tribe even had it's first triplets. But a lot of the elders started dying and the tribe got small again, but this was different than before. The tribe would make it, mostly on fish. Soon the villagers decided to make a building where the elderly could go because they got sick very easily, on top of the others who caught various diseases. They also started fixing up the weird rock pattern where the stream used to flow, it looked like some kind of picture, but there were very few scientists, but the guiding hand knew just how to take care of the tribe. To be continued...
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#215117 - 01/12/10 11:27 PM
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Preview: Still sticking to my word.
Chapter 5. Soon the tribe had built an amazing intricate stone picture. They also had three living huts, the population was booming faster then ever, and they had a magical gong restored. Sadly, all of the people who founded the tribe or were directly related to the people who did died. They was still a rumor that two of the founder had come from a village on the other side of the water fall who came from a magical island called Lewon, which was destroyed by a volcano. And how hundreds of years ago they made dock at this very island. How they had built one of the best tribes in the world. The villagers tried to find out who belonged to the Lewonians, and who was a true, 100 percent Isolan. They soon started running low on food, losing a couple thousand every few hours because most were still kids. Plus, the island got boring. So a few adventurous villager, with a nursing mom and a kid, were selected to go on a raft to explore the island for a new place to inhabit. They soon set off. The winds were blowing North, so the raft headed that way. Once they were rounding the Northern part of the shore, a hurricaine force wind picked up, and waves as tall as the Isolan mountains formed, followed by rain. The raft was being driven towards the shore. The villagers could make a basic outline of Isola, but not what they were headed for. To be continued...
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#215331 - 01/17/10 06:54 AM
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Preview: Nothing to write, how strange.
Chapter 6. The villagers raft was smashed against a partially submerged reef. They looke up and saw a destroyed city. They wonder who built such massive and amazing structures. They all belived in Lewon and the village on the south side of the island. They soon had a chief, fire, food, and were planting a tree. They also had a faction. They belived the power of nature controlled Isola and the surrounding world. They soon had a finished hut, a grown tree, and several various technologies. They built a bath, repelled sharks using a high tech natural repellant potion, and were clearing some rubble. Their basic food and needs were taken care of. But it was a small tribe and people were getting old, but they never feared, for the guiding hand had never let them down, except during the storm. But they felt as though nature had intentions for them on the island, so they didn't blame the guiding hand. They created a more elaborate language then their ancestors could have dreamed of. To be continued...
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#215345 - 01/17/10 07:11 PM
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Preview: When vv4 comes out, it may or may not be added. Chapter 7. The villagers worked hard on their various tasks. They soon had enough tech points to upgrade their research facility. They also discovered that an all orchid potion can prove deadly. They had a key to the door at the top of the path. They wondered who could of built these awesome wonders from scratch, where they had gone, and what was behind the door. They soon had a orchard with three different trees providing food for when the fish seemed to leave. The builders thought they could make out something under the rubble. To be continued...
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#215465 - 01/20/10 04:54 AM
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Preview: Back in vv1.
Chapter 8 (9) look at chapter five if you are confused. The villagers had spent deacades looking for the lost villagers. All they found was a waterfall and very slippery rocks. Most of the elderly villagers had died and the myths of Lewon were quickly being forgotten. The villagers tried taking out the rocks, but they just got more waterfall. The waterfall was so important that the food was barely holding, and the Golden Child's parties were forgotten. One day, a villager swore they saw a whole tribe through the rushing water. He was checked for illness. He was perfectly fine. Slowly more and more people reported the same. The village started hearing noises only a magical gong could make. Soon the tribe saw a person near the waterfall. They tried calling, but the other villager couldn't hear. On the vv2 side of the waterfall the villager saw the faces, remembered some people had come over the waterfall and went back to tell his village. Soon the tribes found a way to comunicate. They shared all types of stories. Soon search parties were sent through parts of the island, trying to find where all the magic had gone, and where the original inhabitants had come from. Work was slow, from various bugs, new outbreaks of disease, and huge lakes surrounded by thick vegetation. It took the cutting tools forever to hack through the bush.
Mean while, in the northern village everything was going pretty smoothely. Fish, fruit, honey, tech points, the newest hut style's, trying to find a new chief, and other various tasks occupied the nine villagers lifes.
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#215719 - 01/27/10 04:57 AM
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Preview: Nearly done with the series, wow.
Chapter 10. The first and second village traded all sorts of things. Collectibles, stories, tools, technology etc. The search parties kept looking through the jungle, without finding the slightest traces of another tribe. Although one villager could have sworn they saw smoke coming from the north part of the island when they were on top of a mountain, but it quickly disapearred. Mean while in the north tribe, they had just finished repairing a magnificent statue, finding all the keys, and discovering a hidden room in the mountain. They're population was booming. They were only lacking tech points, but even those were being caught up with all the builders back from repairing the statue. Then while one of the builders was taking a break from farming, because it was a completley foreing skill, he discovered an unfound and unpreserved scroll in the cave under the collapsed building. It told a story, or more of a diary. It was incredibly worn, and in a language that only the cheif, master scientists, and a few other people took the time to study. he took it to the science lab, where the scientists preserved it. They said they'd soon find out what it said and tell him. The person left wondering why he had all the weird stuff happen to him. This is the villager who had come in the fleet of rafts from the second village trying to find the village that was now his home. Maybe he'd have a new story to tell tonight. He came back later. The scientist translated what was left of the diary. Some pages were missing, and others were half gone. It said that one day the island was thriving, then the next day the island was thrown into chaos. There had been great shakings of the ground, that the statue fell, and that there was a volcanic eruption, and that the author would have to flee now. The author hoped that the collapsed library would keep the texts and wall markings intact, and that one day the island would be prosperous again, and they could return. That night he told the kids the story. Later the scientist found the person again, and told him it was over 500 years old. He asked why that was special. Apperently thats when they're ancestors had left Lewon because they're volcano went off. After several days of research, the scientists found that the lost children which this tribe had based themself off of, mixed with the first village, were the only survivors on the island. It made the villagers think about how the tribes were either Lewonian, or Isolan. It also made them think of how they finally knew who built the island with such great care. They wondered where the Isolan survivors had landed. To be continued...
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#215823 - 01/30/10 10:00 PM
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Preview: There may be only a chapter or two after this, but there could be many more.
Chapter 11. The tribe in the North had nearly everything. They had most of the goals the first chief wanted the tribe to accomplish, plus other various chiefs had added. They had figured out the location of the village where their relatives came from. They used this to guess where the original tribe had landed. With their new top of the line lab, the scientists thought that if they had records from the first tribe, they might be able to find Lewon. The search parties had nearly given up. But they had an increasing number saying they saw smoke coming from the South part of the island. They needed some high tech equipment to get there though, or they would have to send more rafts, and they had already lost one person to the ocean, either that or he had found the South side and was living there. They also tried to look through the centuries of scrolls that had been found or written to see if they could find Lewon. They had no idea about the original Isolans. They just figured that the answer would come with the answer to the island on who built the place. The problem was they had no scrolls from Lewon, nothing to tell them about where Lewon might be. They found a story from one of the first villagers saying that there were books of mysteries, puzzles, life, and success with them on the raft, but when they crashed on the shore they couldn't find them. The first tribe pulled it's search party closest to the north shore to search the shores of the village, while the second tribe kept searching. To be continued...
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#216357 - 02/11/10 12:10 AM
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Preview: With vv4 coming very close to finishing, I am pretty sure I'll be able to include it. If not, I will wait for enough story to come from the game and make one of vv4.
Chapter 12. The northern tribe was at almost 100%. They were missing only populations and collections, plus finding out where Lewon was. Until one day Koro Sitaos ( means likes ants and parrots in Isolan) Rown saw something in the ocean while remembering one of the biggest nights in the tribes history: He had come from the second tribe and new much about the first and second villages. He had once visited the Southern village. He enjoyed watching the kids when he told them of the statue, garden, temple, the pure water of the lagoon, the school, and most of all how they had recorded every event since they had landed. Including the second tribe. They knew there was a third one but couldn't find it. When Koro had found the scroll in the cave he had told the kids how the original inhabitants had fled when a volcano went off on Isola, at the same time the one on Lewon did. One of the kids had asked about the history of Isola. He had never told anyone all he knew about it. He had the history correct from right before the volcano on Lewon to current times. He decided the kids should know. He told how the scientists had found a chemical to stop volcanoes. He quickly added that the potion recipe was lost. Then he talked about the founding of the first tribe, then how two villagers had found the second tribe, with five kids, and thirdly the current tribe. He then added that the prosperous as Lewon had been, and that the Isolan inhabitants could be on Lewon if they were on Isola. However he knew only what the scrolls could tell him, but nothing of the location of Lewon. They would have to communicate with the first tribe to see if they had scrolls of it's location. When he had visited the first tribe he had only seen the sights, and only the scrolls written by the founders and their descendants, so he didn't know if the Lewon scrolls existed or not. While he was remembering that night he saw something in the ocean. Since he was a master farmer now he had no trouble getting the object, and since he had pushed the statue he had no trouble prying it open. It was clear and made of glass. He went to the science facility and asked for a scroll. Since there were none available the scientists had to make a new one from some of the dry wood. On it he wrote about the third tribe, stuck it in the glass object (bottle) and put it in a current that all farmers knew continually circled Isola. He hope the other tribes would find it. To be continued...
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#216532 - 02/13/10 06:51 PM
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Preview: The bottle had made it to the South village, who told the West village. It stated everything the third tribe had found out, including the previous Isolans.
Chapter 13. One of the people searching for the scrolls on the beach found something. It looked like the treasure had. He called his fellow searchers over, and tried to get the box out. Once they had it out they called a builder over and had them open the box. Inside were four books. Each one in Lewonian. That was the current inhabitants of Isola's language. They took them to the science table, and preserved them. Then they copied them and gave the copied scrolls to the second tribe. All the scientists from each tribe met in a special science hut that was built between the two tribe. The scrolls only told about Lewon's puzzles and mysteries, how to live life, and how to be successful. But the mysteries and puzzles book had a long lost answer. There were twin islands in a ocean (Pacific ocean). They were named Lewon and Isola. One day a volcano would go off on each island. Each tribe would try a special potion to stop the eruption, but neither would work. The tribes would flee, and end up on the opposite island. From there seven survivors would turn into 90, then they would start a new tribe with five children who used to have guardians, but the guardians would leave on a mission, never to return. The first tribe would find them, and seven people would turn into a large tribe. From there, a raft would colonize the north shore. They would succeed, then that tribe would colonize a fourth shore. There was more to the books, but they were to worn to tell. They would need the North tribe to figure them out. All the search parties headed North, also wanting to find Lewon. In the Northern tribe, they were hoping for a bottle, especially Koro. Then he went grabbed a lot of scroll from the science facility, sat against a tree, and told the story of his life. Then he passed to the guiding hand, happy and at peace with the world. To be continued...
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#217012 - 02/21/10 12:44 AM
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Preview: this us the last chapter before vv4 comes out, and it could be up to a week before the first vv4 chapter comes out.
Chapter 14. The search parties soon found the third tribe. After a few days all scrolls, techs, and other valuables were traded. The second and third tribe were fairly close, but the first and third were far apart. But soon every tribe was equal. Three scientists from each tribe gathered, trying to find Lewon. They decided that since the islands were twins, that if they found where Isola was, they could find Lewon. There were two ways to do this. The first way was to try and read the rest of the scroll, which would take the scientists a long time to do. The other was to scout nearby areas for hints. Neither seemed easy, and neither would work at all immediately. There was a group of villagers preparing to explore a new shore of Isola, where they might find clues. This would also distract villagers from finding Lewon, because there was much planning, preparation, and finding which villagers would go on this journey. Everyone was trying to find a way that the villagers could be easily found, so that the tribes could remain connected. The search parties were exhausted, and refused to look for a new tribe for awhile. This made the whole island busy, and for awhile every villager only thought about Lewon in the back of their minds, where it was mostly forgotten.
To be continued...
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#218298 - 02/26/10 07:46 PM
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Preview: This is a vv4 chapter. I will try to avoid posting any spoilers.
Chapter 15. The five villagers to go on the trip were selected. An adult male and female, a nursing mother. And a male and female kid. They soon set out on the expidition on foot. They walked for many days. They started feeling hopeless. Then they found the eastern shore. And on it, a huge tree. The two free adults quickly set to work researching and farming. Eventually the nursing mother became free to work. She built a hut, with help from one of the grown kids. The tribe made various tools. Soon some other construction projects were done, the tribe had the second level in four of the technologies, got the feeling they had solved some puzzles on the island. One of the adults who had known Koro was on the trip. He thought Koro would love this side of the island, and he thought of how the kids would react to hearing stories of this part, only if they knew how to find the way back to the third tribe, but they were lost. They solved many more of the puzzles, found various useful collectibles, and had the capability to fish. They healed what they could on the island, slowly bringing the plants and animals life back onto Isola. They had thousands of food, some builders, and researchers. They also had three kids running around, although one of them was about to turn fourteen. Meanwhile, on the north, west, and south side of the island, all the villagers couldn't belive they had lost another village. But, from past experiences, they knew the tribe would eventually thrive, and be found. To be continued...
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#219159 - 03/04/10 01:19 AM
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Preview: This is the last chapter of the story. I will begin to write a new in a few weeks to a few months. I have several ideas and would like some feedback in my comments thread for this story. Chapter 16. (Didn't thinks the story would last this long) The tribe on the eastern shore had finished all the puzzles, and felt they finally understood the island of Isola. They were content and happy, with all they had achieved, both on the eastern shore, and the whole island. The descendants of a tribe who had founded the northern shore with a raft, who had descended from lost children and two people from the southern shore, who were descended from people who came from an equally magical and natural island named Lewon, who when a volcano erupted on the island at the same time as the one on Lewon did, had fled, finding Isola while the previous Isolans found Lewon. That night, the villagers went to bed. Except Roko, who was remembering his dad, Koro.( I didn't change any names, the fact that the two names have the same letters is coincidence) He remembered hearing stories of the rest of Isola, being found and connected with the other shores of the island, and finding Koro dead, lying against a tree. He remembered reading the story of Koro's life. He remembered hearing that Isola and Lewon were twin islands. He remembered hearing of the soon to be expedition, and wanting to go. He remembered the joy of being picked to go, and finding the eastern shore. His memories were interrupted by the sounds of voices. He went to investigate. They had been found by the rest of the island. Isola was once again connected, as the Isolans who were thriving on Lewon just did. With all the knowledge shared among the island, all the researchers gathered and, using top of the line tools found on the eastern shore, made the last half of the book of puzzles and mysteries from Lewon readable. (It's in the spoiler) An expedition would be sent out to find why the life on Isola had died. They would get lost, then find the tree of life that sustained the magic and nature of the island. It would be nearly dead, and the tribes would slowly nurse it back to health. The whole island would thrive and then be connected. Each tribe would accept their origin, and have books about the island they had come from. The tribes would want to find their homeland, but stay on the island they were on. The islands would be different enough for the tribes to visit the others island, but never want to stay for months. Then the Isolans would become true Lewonians, while the Lewonians would become true Isolans. They would make a potion that worked to stop they volcano, using collected sap from the trees of life, which was weakened when the volcano went of, left weakened for many centuries while the first three tribes thrived, be found and be fully restored. The villagers would never have to leave their islands for a volcanic eruption. If they left, it would be their choice, for the trees of life would hide them from the world. From here, each island would choose it's own future, but wherever they went, they would have the success they had had with their new respective islands. The rest of the book just gave ideas and clues on how to make the tribe better. Soon everyone on the island had heard the story. They still needed to find Lewon, but they were closer, and they knew it would happen. They also knew that, no matter what, nothing could forever disrupt the life style of the villagers of the twin islands: Lewon and Isola. Roko, went to the northern shore, bringing the remains of his late mother with him, who was named Paka. He buried his mom, Paka, next to his dad, and told them the story of the twin islands. He knew that even in his advanced stage of life, he might see the day, when the twin islands would unite, forming one of the most potentially productive and successful nations in the unknown, unaware, and possibly to be explored, world around them. He then joined his family, friends, and other fellow Isolan villagers, at a feast and celebration, for knowing what they finally were. The End.
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