Originally Posted By: Airstream Raider
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!



i love it laugh


very creative, but i couldnt help but read it like "Twas the night before Christmas" laugh


Now that is a real compliment. laugh It means the story has a natural rhythm that is easy to follow. I worried about that in a few spots.

THANK ALL OF YOU for the kind comments. laugh
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