Here is the comments thread for The Royal Court Follies

This is envisioned as a three part sonnet, and there will be an illustrations thread drawn by the talented Houjun (with assistance from Sammygirl) as well.

Bravo! I absolutely love it Rock! Especially what you did with my part Beautiful and hilarious sonnet, I'm definitely looking forward to the illustrations and parts 2 and 3. Your poetry is always so refreshing to read

Tears were streaming by the time I finished I was laughing so hard. Looking forward to the rest!

Lol, Rockmower I love it! It's hilarious and very imaginative.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!



i love it


very creative, but i couldnt help but read it like "Twas the night before Christmas"

Now that is a real compliment. It means the story has a natural rhythm that is easy to follow. I worried about that in a few spots.

THANK ALL OF YOU for the kind comments.

I laughed so hard when I read this. It was so funny!! Post a new chapter soon!

It's probably the best poem I've seen so far all this year!!!

I love it Rocky. I love the part, where I'm telling you to stop singing.

For the fans, here is a quick reference guide to all the "court"

Lyssaria: Beastmaster

Rockmower: Court Bard

Xay: Damsel Xay

Carla: Queen Carla

Arthur: King Arthur

LadyCFII: Lady Barbara Fair

HappyPlayer: Princess Geek

Krystal: Princess Geek

Jazzo: the Wizard

Gamemaster1: Sir Gamey

Sammygirl: Maid Sammy (apprentice to the Illustrator of the court

Havoria: Havoria the Great, Reporter Extraordinaire. Also known as the royal scribe

Houjun/Jun : Illustrator of the Court

AR = Sergeant at Arms

Knk = Court Jester

//authors note: Keep in mind that the court may grow at my whim, and solely at my whim. After all, as the "Bard" I reserve sole right to decide who plays what in my "sonnet" -Rockmower//

Thanks again for all the kind comments! I am working diligently to complete Part 2, which will involve a chase around Isola to track down the new game.