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#126269 - 03/29/08 05:37 AM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
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had to give this a try - haikus are so much fun  Feed fish, water plants Late at night, villagers dance Oh, no... morning's here
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#126464 - 03/30/08 01:51 PM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
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Registered: 01/24/08
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I don't know if anyone else caught this, but that line has 8 syllables, not 7 Poems A Bout L D Dou Ble U See?
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#126515 - 03/30/08 06:41 PM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
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This addiction is
Stronger than I can be
I must go and check
To make sure my villagers
Are doing okay today
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#126565 - 03/30/08 09:37 PM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
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Registered: 12/05/06
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I don't know if anyone else caught this, but that line has 8 syllables, not 7 Poems A Bout L D Dou Ble U See? Maybe "LDW" was meant to be an abbreviation for "Last Day of Work"? Not "L D Dou ble U"? I'm not sure though . On the monitor Pixelated people work On the colored screen Pixelated children play I then see my tribe needs food  !
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#126594 - 03/30/08 11:17 PM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
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That would still be too many syllables...
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#126614 - 03/31/08 02:59 AM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
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I don't know if anyone else caught this, but that line has 8 syllables, not 7 Poems A Bout L D Dou Ble U See? Is poems two syllables (po-ems)? If it is then it has nine syllables. I think that whoever wrote it had: po-ems a-bout L-D-W, forgetting that W is is three syllables not 1.
Edited by Becca123 (03/31/08 03:01 AM)
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