The Life Story of Kitty by Casey Lynn - COMMENTS

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Please welcome Casey Lynn and give her your comments.

I like your story! When will there be anymore chapters?

I'm going to post one later on today. I've already writen it up to the fifth chapter, so there's lots more to come.

I think this story is really good! I hope your having fun posting and writing it, 'cuz I'm having fun Reading It! I just know the next chapter is going to be great!

Thanks There's a little hold on the next chapter, though. I have to rewrite some of it. I shouldn't take to long.

I don't normally comment directly on the stories, because I want to be impartial. However, I must admit this one has really drawn me in!

I'm truly glad to see the author is willing to take time to actually work on the story. So many of our authors just give up when I sent them a pm about corrections they need to make.

With Casey Lynn's obvious talent, and positive attitude, I have no doubt she will become a favorite in the Fan Fiction arena!

*overcome with absolute glee at Rockmower's compliment*

Your story is adorable! I love the way you wrote Kitty's dialogue in this. You captured the way a little kid talks perfectly.
Oh my goodness. It's so cute!

Thank you so much!

Chapter 2 update: It's almost done, I'll be able to post either tomorrow or the day after.

Good news! Chapter two has been submitted! Hopefully it doesn't need another round of editing.

Very interesting story speciality the second chapter.

Thank you!

I love the 2nd chapter! Keep 'em coming!

I love this story! Chapter 2 was great!

Thank you to both of you.

By the way, if anyone's wondering what Celeste looks like, that's her in my avatar.

I like how you altered some of the writing to get the true perspective of a three year old.

Thank you, I loved writing from a little kid's perspective, since they seem to notice the funniest little things.

Celeste isn't my avvie no more. I went for the deeper approach. XD

Hi, I love your story! I bet you'd be a wonderful author!

Thanks!

Much welcome

I loved Ch. 2! I can see that you really put forth much effort and time into making your story as wonderful as it is right now! Keep up the great work Casey Lynn!

Thank you!

I love your story! I can't wait for Chapter 3!

Thanks, Chapter three will be out soon, I just have to fix it up a little bit.

Your story has just reached a new level of awesomness! Great job!

Thanks so much Chapter four is coming soon, I just have to type it up. Would have been sooner, but my laptop's screen broke due to my elbow crashing through it. We didn't gat a new computer until just now, literally.


Or is it chapter 5...*tries to think*

I really hope I can get the rest soon.

Ow! that must have hurt! Did you bleed and have to go to the hospital? And Mainly how did you that?! I hope it didn't hurt a lot.

No it didn't hurt me, just the laptop. My sister was playing on it and she stuck it next to me for some reason, and as I turned to get something I hit it with my elbow because I didn't see it there. I went into a major meltdown mode.

oh no

Bad bad bad bad baditty bad bad news.

So, we have had our new computer for a while now, but there's this ugly monsterous thing, (some might call it high school,) that's keeping me from even beginning to think about finishing the story. I had the whole plotline and EVERYTHING on my laptop, and since that's smashed to bits, (eh...I kinda beat it with a hammer after I broke the screen, to relieve stress, ya'know?) I really don't know if I have the time or motivation to finish the story. I really don't know where to go from here, if I should just kill it, or do a little anti-climactic epolouge. Both options sound pretty tragic.

Maybe I could change the whole direction of the story and instead of Kitty finding her original tribe, she accidentally stumbles across central Isola, where the heathens dwell. I would love doing this, since I'm getting bored with the setting of VV4 anyway, but I'd have to wait until I got the game on my parents payday. I think a new plotline like this will make me want to make time for writing the story, instead of playing Wii maybe I'd rather write a few chapters. I'd like to know what you guys think before I do anything, since I don't want to go off in a direction that no one wants to read about.

It's up to you guys, should I kill the story, give it a quick epolouge-ish final chapter, or twist it in the direction of VV5? I know if I choose the latter I'd have to somehow find a way of tying Kitty's mother's fate into the mix, maybe she was captured also and lost faith in the guiding hand? That would definately be interesting. I really want to hear some opinions on the matter, so please reply ASAP!

Oh, twist it for VV5. You=Good Writer. Or start a new story.

thanks for the complement and input.

Your story is so good! You should totally continue into VV5!

Okay thanks for your input. Right now it looks like I'll be going the vv5 route, I just need the game first. :P

Original tribe or VV5? You decide, I like both

That's be vv5 then! lol.

Just got virtual villagers five! Next chapter is soon to follow!

The new chapter is here!!!

Wow, I love it! I've neglected all my fanfics lately...

It's wonderful, Casey Lynn!