Comments - Lomai the Hero

Posted by: Joine The Great

Comments - Lomai the Hero - 05/06/10 09:21 PM

Comments for my story, Lomai the Hero, which can be read here.
Posted by: VFLover09

Re: Comments - Lomai the Hero - 06/26/10 06:27 PM

Bravo, Joine! I liked it even though it was a one shot story. smile
Posted by: chocolatechip

Re: Comments - Lomai the Hero - 07/02/10 12:22 AM

I really, really liked it, Joine! Keep on writing!