Balun's Tale - Parts 1 & 2 (Comments)

Posted by: Lizzy1990

Balun's Tale - Parts 1 & 2 (Comments) - 02/13/10 04:14 PM

Please review on Balun's Tale in this thread. Any feedback or comments are welcome. ^_^

You can read the story here

-Lizzy<3
Posted by: horsecrazy123

Re: Balun's Tale - Parts 1 & 2 (Comments) - 02/17/10 08:53 PM

I loved it! I also think I know what the next part is about, and I hope Balun gets a second chance for true love. grin
Posted by: chocolatechip

Re: Balun's Tale - Parts 1 & 2 (Comments) - 08/03/10 10:38 PM

I loved it! I read it over and over again! I can't wait for Part 2!