Posted by: chocolatechip
Persephone the Castaway (Spoilers) - 07/02/10 07:30 PM
This is my first story! There are spoilers, so consider yourself warned! This is the first chapter of "Persephone the Castaway" Persephone is pronounced pur-sef'-uh-nee and Annaleigh is pronounced anna-lay. I'm sorry if you don't like my story, after all this is my first try! Peace out!
Ch.1 Shipwrecked
" 'Seph! Wake up! Wake up, Persephone!"
I wake up, groaning. "I'm up! I'm not deaf, Annaleigh."
My best friend, Annaleigh, is kneeling over me. She's 25, just one year younger then me. We look almost exactly alike except for our eyes. Hers are blue while mine are walnut brown.
I sit up and ask her "Um... Anna, Where exactly are we?" She looks at me with a sad face and answers "I don't really know. The ship sank, remember? I guess we washed up on this beach."
That's when it all comes back to me. Annaleigh and I were on a cruse ship. We were in first class, listening to music in our spacious dorm. There was a terrible storm going on. There was thunder, lighting, howling winds, rain, and huge waves.
Then, the lights turned red and loud sirens went off. We rushed out of our dorm to the top deck. The captain was instructing people to get into the life rafts. The ship was sinking. We jumped on to a life raft. Then, a HUGE wave threw everyone off their rafts. All I remember after that was sinking under the water.
"Hello!? Earth to 'Seph!" Annaleigh says as she waves her hand in front of my face. "Sorry, I was thinking about the ship. Annaleigh And I get up and spot a person on the beach. We run over and shake him really hard. His eyes finally open. He asks "Where Am I and who are you people?"
Annaleigh answers by telling him what happened last night. I end the story by saying " To get to the point, We don't know where we are." The man is about 24 years old with deep red hair and light blue eyes. He introduces himself as Rasche.
We all walk around until Rasche yells "Look! There's a Village Let's go check it out!" He runs over to the village and we follow him. As we enter the village, we see a little girl crying and being comforted by her older brother.
They both look at us. The little girl runs over to us screaming "Look ,Alohi! People! people! I knew that chocolatechip would send us help! I knew it!"
She comes up and hugs me. She's about up to my waist. She has blond, curly hair and beautiful blue eyes. Her older brother stands up. "Napa! Where are your Manners!" He walks over to us as Napa detaches herself from me. "Sorry about Napa. I'm Alohi and welcome to Isola. Who are you people?"
The end of Ch. 1 Hope you enjoyed! The other chapters will be out soon! Peace out!
Ch.1 Shipwrecked
" 'Seph! Wake up! Wake up, Persephone!"
I wake up, groaning. "I'm up! I'm not deaf, Annaleigh."
My best friend, Annaleigh, is kneeling over me. She's 25, just one year younger then me. We look almost exactly alike except for our eyes. Hers are blue while mine are walnut brown.
I sit up and ask her "Um... Anna, Where exactly are we?" She looks at me with a sad face and answers "I don't really know. The ship sank, remember? I guess we washed up on this beach."
That's when it all comes back to me. Annaleigh and I were on a cruse ship. We were in first class, listening to music in our spacious dorm. There was a terrible storm going on. There was thunder, lighting, howling winds, rain, and huge waves.
Then, the lights turned red and loud sirens went off. We rushed out of our dorm to the top deck. The captain was instructing people to get into the life rafts. The ship was sinking. We jumped on to a life raft. Then, a HUGE wave threw everyone off their rafts. All I remember after that was sinking under the water.
"Hello!? Earth to 'Seph!" Annaleigh says as she waves her hand in front of my face. "Sorry, I was thinking about the ship. Annaleigh And I get up and spot a person on the beach. We run over and shake him really hard. His eyes finally open. He asks "Where Am I and who are you people?"
Annaleigh answers by telling him what happened last night. I end the story by saying " To get to the point, We don't know where we are." The man is about 24 years old with deep red hair and light blue eyes. He introduces himself as Rasche.
We all walk around until Rasche yells "Look! There's a Village Let's go check it out!" He runs over to the village and we follow him. As we enter the village, we see a little girl crying and being comforted by her older brother.
They both look at us. The little girl runs over to us screaming "Look ,Alohi! People! people! I knew that chocolatechip would send us help! I knew it!"
She comes up and hugs me. She's about up to my waist. She has blond, curly hair and beautiful blue eyes. Her older brother stands up. "Napa! Where are your Manners!" He walks over to us as Napa detaches herself from me. "Sorry about Napa. I'm Alohi and welcome to Isola. Who are you people?"
The end of Ch. 1 Hope you enjoyed! The other chapters will be out soon! Peace out!