I don't normally comment directly on the stories, because I want to be impartial. However, I must admit this one has really drawn me in!
I'm truly glad to see the author is willing to take time to actually work on the story.
So many of our authors just give up when I sent them a pm about corrections they need to make.
With Casey Lynn's obvious talent, and positive attitude, I have no doubt she will become a favorite in the Fan Fiction arena!