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#206247 - 08/02/09 10:09 AM The Visitors - Comments
Lyssaria Legend Registered: 06/20/09 Posts: 1476 Loc: Suburban Isola	Post your comments here for ken01's story The Visitors. ________________________ I am already a big fan of your writing style ken, I just couldn't pass up the opportunity to post my comments! I look forward to seeing what happens to the village and the further adventures of Liana. It was a great joy reading your story, thank you for sharing it with us and welcome to the forums! _________________________ Please send mod requests to the mod section on the forum.
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#206262 - 08/02/09 11:34 AM Re: The Visitors - Comments [Re: Lyssaria]
laurence Fan Fiction Enthusiast Registered: 11/23/06 Posts: 4791 Loc: Paris, France	WOW! I can't wait for the next chapter! It seems to be full of adventures! And I already love the little Liana! She really could be the hero of the tribe _________________________ **** My Story: Aika's Memoirs in Kitten's forum
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#206266 - 08/02/09 11:58 AM Re: The Visitors - Comments [Re: Lyssaria]
ken01 Newbie Registered: 07/22/09 Posts: 17 Loc: wonderfull ILLonis	wow! I wish i was finished with chapter 2... and i am! go read it!... when i post it and gm's check it... _________________________ the cat's name is harry(avitar)!look for him in my storys!the only now is The visitors!check it out!
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#206522 - 08/03/09 10:40 PM Re: The Visitors - Comments [Re: ken01]
HappyPlayer Guru Registered: 04/21/07 Posts: 768 Loc: In my closet... um, can someon...	What a great beginning Ken! I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting for more!! _________________________ - HappyPlayer Forum Moderator "Never be embarrassed to be easily amused!" - HP
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#206573 - 08/04/09 09:43 AM Re: The Visitors - Comments [Re: HappyPlayer]
Annthewhofan Fan Fiction Enthusiast Registered: 03/09/07 Posts: 2408 Loc: Northwest, England	Very good chapter I have a feeling this is going to be good. No pressure mind _________________________
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#206957 - 08/06/09 12:17 AM Re: The Visitors - Comments [Re: Lyssaria]
ken01 Newbie Registered: 07/22/09 Posts: 17 Loc: wonderfull ILLonis	been awhile, but i posted chp.2 and gave rocky chp. 3! i can tell you, no. 3 is looong! and iv'e been buisy, so no. 2 should be on in 1-3 days, when rockmower can approve it, and 3 in 3-5, when he edits it! keep the comments comeing, my newfound friends! _________________________ the cat's name is harry(avitar)!look for him in my storys!the only now is The visitors!check it out!
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#206987 - 08/06/09 11:11 AM Re: The Visitors - Comments [Re: ken01]
Lyssaria Legend Registered: 06/20/09 Posts: 1476 Loc: Suburban Isola	Oh wow, chapter 2 is really mysterious ken! It's already up so that was not a long wait at all. I thought the growling noise was worrying enough, now she has touched that cursed rock and drank a potion that has made her ill. Her luck really is changing! I loved reading chapter 2, I can't wait for chapter 3 to show up _________________________ Please send mod requests to the mod section on the forum.
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#207370 - 08/09/09 01:46 PM Re: The Visitors - Comments [Re: Lyssaria]
laurence Fan Fiction Enthusiast Registered: 11/23/06 Posts: 4791 Loc: Paris, France	Oh! This chapter is really worrying!! Originally Posted By: ken01 ... ........................................................ I'm sorry, but this chapter has gotten out of hand. In chapter 3: Will the Guiding hand respond? What was happening near the forest that was so interesting, Isola herself was amazed? where IS the Guiding hand? those will be questions answered and more in chp3 of the visitor!(originally supposed to be in this one...) sorry 4 the w8, i could't find chp. 2 in my files! and all that questions!! Please! Tell us the next chapter!! _________________________ **** My Story: Aika's Memoirs in Kitten's forum
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#207382 - 08/09/09 03:05 PM Re: The Visitors - Comments [Re: laurence]
Lewanda Legend Registered: 04/17/09 Posts: 1258 Loc: Ky	I hope we don't have to wait too very long for the answers to those questions ken01. I love mysteries! _________________________ Lewanda FREEDOM'S SONG
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#207396 - 08/09/09 07:14 PM Re: The Visitors - Comments [Re: Lewanda]
ken01 Newbie Registered: 07/22/09 Posts: 17 Loc: wonderfull ILLonis	right now rockmower has chp3 and im working on chp4. don't worry, it has a happy end =) _________________________ the cat's name is harry(avitar)!look for him in my storys!the only now is The visitors!check it out!
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#208107 - 08/20/09 04:10 PM Re: The Visitors - Comments [Re: ken01]
ken01 Newbie Registered: 07/22/09 Posts: 17 Loc: wonderfull ILLonis	guys, im sorry it took so long! chp 3 is hear, and 4's being edited!!! my internet failed, so it took awhile to fix. so keep checking back, and most of all, have fun reading the story! also, pleese note... (" this autimated message will selfdestruct in 5... 4... Boom! ) Edited by ken01 (08/20/09 07:26 PM) _________________________ the cat's name is harry(avitar)!look for him in my storys!the only now is The visitors!check it out!
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#208790 - 08/27/09 03:46 PM Re: The Visitors - Comments [Re: ken01]
Annthewhofan Fan Fiction Enthusiast Registered: 03/09/07 Posts: 2408 Loc: Northwest, England	Very good chapters _________________________
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#210513 - 09/19/09 09:47 AM Re: The Visitors - Comments [Re: Annthewhofan]
laurence Fan Fiction Enthusiast Registered: 11/23/06 Posts: 4791 Loc: Paris, France	I almost missed these last chapters! And it would be a pity as they are very suspenseful!! But I must tell that I'm not sure to well follow all these going-there-and-back to US shore from Isola and to Isola from US shore!! Anyway, I'm glad that Liana is going well now! _________________________ **** My Story: Aika's Memoirs in Kitten's forum
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