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#203994 - 07/17/09 09:30 PM
Re: The Royal Court Follies
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Legend
Registered: 06/20/09
Posts: 1476
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Bravo! I absolutely love it Rock!  Especially what you did with my part  Beautiful and hilarious sonnet, I'm definitely looking forward to the illustrations and parts 2 and 3. Your poetry is always so refreshing to read
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#203996 - 07/17/09 09:34 PM
Re: The Royal Court Follies
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Registered: 04/19/08
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Tears were streaming by the time I finished I was laughing so hard. Looking forward to the rest!
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#204003 - 07/17/09 10:35 PM
Re: The Royal Court Follies
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! i love it  very creative, but i couldnt help but read it like "Twas the night before Christmas"
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#204126 - 07/18/09 07:10 PM
Re: The Royal Court Follies
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Master Poet
Registered: 12/16/07
Posts: 1007
Loc: The Beautiful Ozarks
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! i love it very creative, but i couldnt help but read it like "Twas the night before Christmas" Now that is a real compliment. It means the story has a natural rhythm that is easy to follow. I worried about that in a few spots. THANK ALL OF YOU for the kind comments.
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#204137 - 07/18/09 07:37 PM
Re: The Royal Court Follies
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Registered: 05/02/08
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Loc: Isola Island
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I laughed so hard when I read this. It was so funny!! Post a new chapter soon!
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#204139 - 07/18/09 08:09 PM
Re: The Royal Court Follies
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Registered: 09/07/08
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Loc: Berkeley, CA
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It's probably the best poem I've seen so far all this year!!!
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#204148 - 07/18/09 08:49 PM
Re: The Royal Court Follies
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Registered: 11/10/08
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Loc: On a secret mission
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I love it Rocky. I love the part, where I'm telling you to stop singing. For the fans, here is a quick reference guide to all the "court" Lyssaria: Beastmaster Rockmower: Court Bard Xay: Damsel Xay Carla: Queen Carla Arthur: King Arthur LadyCFII: Lady Barbara Fair HappyPlayer: Princess Geek Krystal: Princess Geek Jazzo: the Wizard Gamemaster1: Sir Gamey Sammygirl: Maid Sammy (apprentice to the Illustrator of the court Havoria: Havoria the Great, Reporter Extraordinaire. Also known as the royal scribe Houjun/Jun : Illustrator of the Court AR = Sergeant at Arms Knk = Court Jester //authors note: Keep in mind that the court may grow at my whim, and solely at my whim. After all, as the "Bard" I reserve sole right to decide who plays what in my "sonnet"  -Rockmower//
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#206201 - 08/02/09 12:25 AM
Re: The Royal Court Follies
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Registered: 07/22/09
Posts: 17
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Nice rockmower! I really am looking forward to part 2, and i want to tell you there is no rush, so dont overlook proofreading! It is funny, too! I laughed when the bard (you ) was scareing the animals and annoying the people with your lyre! keep up the awsome poems! i can now see why you are the master poet!
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#206371 - 08/02/09 11:36 PM
Re: The Royal Court Follies
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Registered: 10/23/07
Posts: 223
Loc: Sydney, Australia
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A three part sonnet?? Please give us time between parts to let our ribs stop hurting from laughing.  That is awesome Rocky and I think you were harshly judged for your singing. I have heard that you have a good voice.  We will eagerly await part 2. 
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#206397 - 08/03/09 07:16 AM
Re: The Royal Court Follies
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Registered: 01/24/08
Posts: 1695
Loc: One of the thirteen colonies
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Rock, this is a wonderfully creative poem so far ! I am working diligently to complete Part 2, which will involve a chase around Isola to track down the new game. Maybe after the new game is found, the court will have to tweak certain parts, like the storyline ?
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#206491 - 08/03/09 06:57 PM
Re: The Royal Court Follies
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Registered: 12/16/07
Posts: 1007
Loc: The Beautiful Ozarks
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I think you were harshly judged for your singing. I have heard that you have a good voice. Uhh...I think you heard incorrectly...I do have LOUD voice,  BUT, my singing voice? Let's just say that when I start, everyone around me yells  Rock, this is a wonderfully creative poem so far ! Thank You! I am working diligently to complete Part 2, which will involve a chase around Isola to track down the new game. Part 2 is written, but on hold until the Court Illustrator can get the Illustration thread started in Fan Art. First work held her back, now illness.  *whispers "Don't tell anyone, but there will be a BIG surprise in there for those who like to do graphics!*Maybe after the new game is found, the court will have to tweak certain parts, like the storyline ? Who knows what may happen when/if the New Game is found? 
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#207982 - 08/19/09 11:26 AM
Re: The Royal Court Follies
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Registered: 06/20/09
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Oh my goodness, bravo again Rock! I had no idea what to expect of part 2, but I absolutely loved it! Beyond any of my expectations, really This has had to be your best yet! Lol I love how my beastmaster glow was used in the story as well, brilliant!
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#208552 - 08/25/09 05:50 PM
Re: The Royal Court Follies - Illustration thread
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Registered: 09/07/08
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Cool 2nd chapter.
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#208956 - 08/30/09 10:18 AM
Re: The Royal Court Follies - Illustration thread
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#209020 - 08/31/09 01:32 PM
Re: The Royal Court Follies - Illustration thread
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Registered: 02/26/09
Posts: 190
Loc: The Dog World
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love chapter 2
Edited by Bluedog13 (08/31/09 01:33 PM)
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#216325 - 02/10/10 01:52 AM
Re: The Royal Court Follies - Illustration thread
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Registered: 12/16/09
Posts: 112
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WOW! I was never a big fan of poetry until I read this one! How did you come up with this one? (clapping to THE BEST POET IN THE WORLD!!!) P.S. Is VV4 "the new game"? If it is, this story has been started on and now it is Why why why is it still in the Then in a manner quite magic young Jazzo again,
stirred up a potion while it started to rain,
and again whisked us all to the Fortress, or lair,
where all were soon met by Barb Lady Fair.
and the game was placed in a magical room,
where it could grow, while the Betas hummed their tune.
Edited by 123isolagirl (02/10/10 02:07 AM)
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#216560 - 02/14/10 02:10 AM
Re: The Royal Court Follies - Illustration thread
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Master Poet
Registered: 12/16/07
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Loc: The Beautiful Ozarks
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Thank you for the wonderful compliments 123isolagirl!  This was intended to be a funny poem that reflects the development of any new games, but I confess it was inspired with the announcement that they were working on VV4. I'm not sure I understand the question you're asking at the end.
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#218110 - 02/25/10 11:44 AM
Re: The Royal Court Follies - Illustration thread
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Registered: 09/05/07
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THIS POEM IS AMAZING!! I couldn't write a poem to save my life! I love how it ties the forum members to the island of Isola. You truly are a master poet!!
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