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#122325 - 03/04/08 09:00 PM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
[Re: Jazzo]
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Fan Fiction Enthusiast
Registered: 05/02/07
Posts: 2772
Loc: The 'Merica
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*gasp* Just when I thought this might be a contest I had a shot at... The great Jazzo appears with his amazing poems!  LOL EDIT: Okay, I thought for a while and came up with one of each... I may do more later, once my creative energies have recharged. Neither of them rhyme... that's what I get for trying this at night.... Tanka:These little people Can cause us to act crazy At times we are seen Yelling at our computers: “Go get the mushroom!” Haiku:Our pixel people Run back and forth on the map Of our VV games! ANOTHER EDIT: Do these poems have to be about the VV games? Because I'm considering coming up with something for our admins and mods!  And possibly one about PT.... hmmmm.... lol
Edited by Krystal (03/04/08 09:26 PM)
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#122332 - 03/04/08 10:42 PM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
[Re: Krystal]
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Senior Uber-Member
Registered: 09/21/06
Posts: 1692
Loc: Houston, TX
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LDW related  write to your hearts content
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#122338 - 03/04/08 11:13 PM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
[Re: eyeshigh]
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Guru
Registered: 12/27/07
Posts: 703
Loc: In a happy place =D
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I just wrote these  Don't know if I will have a chance!! Swift, choppy ocean, Washing up colorful shells, Kids splashing about. Strong builders nailing Sheltering, safe strawgrass huts Protection from rain. Beautiful blue sea, Mothers show their shy babies, Whispering softly. Smooth, tender green leaves, Blossoming soft pink flowers, Leaving fragile seeds. Magical island, Isola is it's true name, Full of mystery... Pebbles in the tank, Fish swimming happily too. Strange mystery eggs, We may get fish that are new, The magic fish may be near. The small tribe of mine, Works to find its only food. The guiding hand helps, But we still may not survive, Help our small village to thrive. A baby is held, By a nurturing parent. Soon to be a child. The parent shows the baby, The ocean the waves, the sun. Isola is pure, Isola is magical, Some do not survive. Villagers co-operate, And lend eachother a hand.
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#122358 - 03/05/08 06:25 AM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
[Re: Becca123]
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Expert
Registered: 09/08/07
Posts: 187
Loc: Some-where, Over the Water-fal...
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can it be plant/fish tycoon related?
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#122371 - 03/05/08 08:00 AM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
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Registered: 04/13/05
Posts: 2638
Loc: Island of Isola
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Loki, yes. Any thing LDW related is good to go. Plant and Fish Tycoon are LDW related so feel free to use them.
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#122449 - 03/05/08 04:33 PM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
[Re: eyeshigh]
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Forum Games Enthusiast
Registered: 01/18/07
Posts: 508
Loc: Basketball Court
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i love LDW they know how to make the games i know how to play
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#122462 - 03/05/08 05:18 PM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
[Re: Village Idiot Jr]
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Master Magician
Registered: 11/04/06
Posts: 2136
Loc: jazzothegreat.com
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More!!!
Tanka #3
Research, farm, and build, Everyone has lots to do, Get the food bin filled, Hey this puzzle's almost through, which job have I set for you?
Tanka #4
Isola is great, Villagers are living there, we control their fate, We guide them and let them thrive, First they must learn to survive.
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#122479 - 03/05/08 06:49 PM
Re: Poetry Contest - Haiku and Tanka
[Re: Jazzo]
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Consigliere
Registered: 12/05/06
Posts: 207
Loc: Oklahoma
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Oooh, I wanna try  ! Though I'm not very good... HaikusUnder the hot sun A celebration is made a mystery solved
Just beyond the shore Golden Gates of Isola Reveal a village
So much is unknown Yet so much is dicovered On this new Island
Go sit in the sand Feel the rhythm of the sea Between you and me
Go look around you Isola works its magic Some that you can't seeTankasA villager falls Only on desolate land Forever in fear Of a crate never to come But in hope of to anew
A new mother rests With a baby on her lap Gazing at the sea Or looking up at the sky And reaching for whats beyond
Basking in the sun Is a large crab in its wake Very unaware Of a boy standing above A spear ready at his hand
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